Something that I don't think has been done and inspired from reading the Superhero thread, with this being something I am sure everyone of us has done for a film. is say what you would change about it. The change could be small details that you would add in that the theatrical addition couldn't have due to time or they just didn't think of it. Or it could be on the other end of the spectrum and you want to change everything.
In the spirit of things, I will start with a film series I think about a lot every time I watch it which is Star Wars. Now I am a huge Star Wars fan and think each movie could have had many different things to make them better. Now I won't go over each film, unless this is successful and wanted, but I will start with what at the time was the most controversial film in the sage,
The Phantom Menace (1999). Some of these are things I have thought of, extended scenes that were cut, or were in the novel from the script. I will have them in chronological order through the film.
- For the film opening while the Republic delegation ship was arriving to Naboo I would have shown a brief practice sparing match between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. Nothing crazy, similar to Qui-Gon vs Darth Maul in length but something to wet everyone's appetite and show we are seeing far different Jedi then shown in the Original Trilogy. I think this would be a warmer opening as well into the "delegation meeting" and likens to A New Hopes battle opening instead of just docking in the Trade Federation battlestation.
- Introduce Jango Fett on Tatooine. I think a good spot would be after Anakin, Jar Jar, and Sebulba interact. It could be similar to Han and Greedo but with Jango firing first and killing the target for Jabba bounty and Qui-Gon can notice him. Or Jango is at the bar/restaurant in his armor and Qui-Gon inquires about him and Anakin answers that he is a very famous and deadly bounty hunter. Jango notices Qui-Gon and company while realizing he is a Jedi. (He wasn't picked as the clone template for no reason.
- During the podrace have Jango kill a rival and other favorite for the victory from a Jabba bounty because Jabba wants Sebulba to win due to betting. They already showed Jabba at the podrace and it's supposed to be like poetry. Father and son working for Jabba. Jango realizes and figures out Qui-Gon and company are from Naboo through Watto and he knowing the Trade Federation has a bounty on their heads. Jango confronts them and a short fight ensues between Jango and Qui-Gon with Jango escaping. (This to establish Jango is not one to be messed with for later films and Qui-Gon can hold his own to show for the rest of the movie and make his death bigger).
- When Anakin and Qui-Gon are leaving to head back to the ship, keep the scene of Qui-Gon noticing and destroying the probe droid from Darth Maul which inspires them to hurry back to the ship in order to leave the planet. Then show a different droid coming to Maul and him heading off after them.
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jeTelNwk-uk
5 Keep the extended scene between Qui-Gon vs Darth Maul with Maul jumping on the ship walkway with a brief fight before Qui-Gon knocks Maul back to the ground.
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=watvoAn2ui8
- Introduce Grievous as a senator prerobot from a war cultural planet who is at odds with Naboo's peaceful culture. Grievous will side with the Trade Federation's senator. This will give Padme a rival for Attack of the Clones for the talks against arming for the Separatist movement, This will also show how someone can go from humanoid to cyborg when he is shown as he is in Revenge of the Sith.
- Introduce and have Count Dooku on the Jedi Council. Dooku can be shown of his attachment with Qui-Gon and side with him about training Anakin or Dooku finishing training Ob-Wan. Further have Qui-Gon and Dooku privately talk about Anakin more and have Qui-Gon bring up Jango. Show Dooku even wanting to send more Jedi or personally go with them back to Naboo and this request be denied by Mace and Yoda. This will not only reinforce Dooku's being disheartment with the Jedi and the Jedi Council but also give Dooku and Darth Sidious the candidate for their clone template.
- Give more time to the rest of the Jedi Council to speak, this is a council after all.
- Show Dooku and Senator Palpatine as friends and conversing later that day about how Dooku doesn't agree with the council's decision and about Anakin potentially being the chosen one. This can be further reinforced when Sidious and Maul are speaking on Coruscant Maul can tell Sidious that a child powerful in the force was leaving with Qui-Gon. This is how Sidious can plot for his next 2 apprentices.
- Keep the extended dual between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan vs Darth Maul.
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Uvad9uSc9k&t=52s
11. At Qui-Gon's funeral show Dooku visibly upset about it. At the end have Dooku talking with Palpatine and showing his disenlightenment with the Jedi Order and Palpatine slowly turning his thoughts to the Dark Side.
End movie. All in all I think this would add about 10-15 minutes to the movie run time. I hope you guys enjoyed it.